nice
very nice. sounds good through out although the only thing i will say is it gets a bit same-y, but not boring! Overall a very nice song!
nice
very nice. sounds good through out although the only thing i will say is it gets a bit same-y, but not boring! Overall a very nice song!
thanks! il try to vary my next song a little more :P
very nice
very nice tune, all sounds good!
one improvement woul be to bing the drop to about 0:55. the reason being you feel like it should drop but then theres all this smooth filtery stuff and it kind of take the edge off of it. other than that very nice. Just needs a better drop.
I know...many people have said that before :P
It's okay
Not terrible, but not great. The chords and song structure are okay but the playing is a little off in places, but nothing practice won't cure. Also the audio quality is rather bad, and the silence at the beginning is not necessary.
All in all just practice a bit and get a better recording software. Use the software to cut out the bit at the beginning, and make sure it all sounds okay.
Thanks for your honesty. And I apologize about the audio quality, my interface stopped working for some reason, so I had to just put a mic near the amp and pray for the best. But thanks again for taking the time to listen and critique.
Meh
Its a cool beat, weird, but not really a "top song". Needs more melody.
very nice
Good sounds and trancey! what you do need is a longer synth sound over the top, that would just step it up a level :D
bass-y :P
Arabian 8-bit? Good sound, but repetitive, perhaps make the tune longer, add some variation.
lol
I Figured it Was Too repetitive...
Ah Well...I Tried,
Thanks For The Review
nice
Vocals are a bit . . . well . . . odd. And work on the build up at the beginning, it's all a bi sudden really, just work at it. other than that, maybe back off on the repetitiveness and add some breaks. =]
thanks! will have in mind!! lml
i wonder . .
BEER RUN! :D
it is ok
this is ok, lots of potential i must say it's just the structure that needs work. For one there is no build up, just jumps into the fast bit. Second it needs a lot more bass, and that includes a good kick to it, its too quiet. Thirdly it need to be longer, and in a break and some more of the faster bits and it should come out quite well. You have all the ingredients, you just need to mix them up a bit better.
thx a lot bro!
Male
Joined on 3/28/10